So, would you hire me?

It looks good to me. Do you already have a professional resume prepared? If not, you might want to look online, or in your local area, for a professional resume writing service. I have used a company called Rescue My Resume in the past. Had good luck, but they are only one of many out there. I have found that a well written resume has a very positive affect on potential employers, and you would be surprised how many people don't bother to have one prepared. Anway, it looks like you are on the right track best of luck to you. M:)